The Straitjackets
Spring 2009
page 14


                                                                Short Story

                                     Once in a Lifetime
                                                      by Zachary P. Edwards

             “That’s the third one today!” Antonio pointed to the dead coyote on the side of the road.  Although he and his friend, Martin, traveled at speeds over 60 miles an hour, they observed details of the carcass.  The dry blood appeared black on the white and light gray fur.  Dirt and dust lay thick on the dead animal.  All four legs were stiff and pointed towards the road.  The coyote’s eyelids were open, the high yellow sun reflecting off the fixed eyeballs.

 

             This Southern Californian valley was a quiet retirement community before, but over the years it had become another generic commercial town with six Starbucks and two Wal-Mart Supestores in a 15-mile radius.  The mountains surrounding the valley stood high, yet not symmetrical.  The valley floor, almost circular, was perfect, as if God needed a bowl for His cereal.

 

           Martin nodded.  “Yeah.  We see them all the time.  What’s the big deal?”

 

          “Well, we’ve been here our whole lives.  When was the last time you saw one just walking around these hills?” Antonio asked.

 

            “I’ve never seen one walking around here.”

 

            “Have you ever seen three in one day?”

 

            “Only dead.”

 

            “How about a pack?  Have you ever seen a pack of coyotes here in the valley?”

 

            “No.  I’ve never seen a pack of them here in the valley.”  Martin answered, an awkward tone of realization in his voice.

 

            “And I bet you a hundred dollars you won’t.”

 

            The two men had been friends for over a decade and worked together as masons for the last four years.  Monday through Friday, Martin and Antonio worked hard constructing concrete driveways to five story bell towers.  They took pictures of their work with a digital camera and created a portfolio of their work.  The portfolio contained the photographs as well as detailed captions and notes.  They recorded the start and end dates of construction, the location of the jobsite, the types of material used, including brand names and colors of specific veneer and mortar.  Sometimes they recorded the weather and how many people worked on the job.  They used the portfolio as a tool to show potential customers their finished product.

 

            On Saturdays, the two would study other peoples’ work.  They would hunt for ruins of buildings and ranches in Riverside County to inspect mason work.  Usually, the men would find tall stone pillars that once held the gates of the main entrance or short walls that were property markers.  Occasionally, they discovered chimneys or wells intact.  They took pictures and field notes and created a second portfolio.  They used this as a tool to help them gain knowledge of masons, materials, and techniques before them.  Sometimes up to 200 years before them.

 

           “But why count the dead ones?” asked Martin, with a sarcastic tone to his voice.

 

            “These animals are searching for food, water, or habitat.  They die because of these highways.  These coyotes are not the only animals that get ran over every day.”

 

 

            “I know.”  Martin nodded again.  “I hit an owl before.  I also hit a deer with my old truck.  And I think I ran over a couple of rabbits on that dirt road off of Cottonwood.”

 

             “That’s what I’m talking about.  The owl, deer, and coyote are all important images to the Natives, and people don’t seem to care anymore if they die because people have to drive their cars.”

 

            “Well it’s too late to stop that evil Henry Ford.  That mastermind of varmint eradication,” Martin said.

 

            “All I am saying is that this valley, those caves, those streams belong to all of these animals.  We’re cutting their lives short by trespassing on their land.  Imagine this valley 250 years ago.  Before the buildings, the roads, the landfills, the smog.”  Antonio paused staring straight ahead between the steering wheel and the visor as if he were looking into the past.  “Beautiful!”

 

            “Beautiful!” Martin said.

 

             Near 7 P.M. the two men reached their destination.  Two miles up a winding dirt road they found the ruins of a ranch that had burned down some fifty years ago.  Antonio put the truck into park and turned off the engine.  They jumped out of the truck.  Antonio lifted the driver’s seat up toward the steering wheel to retrieve the digital camera as Martin reached for the notebook, pen, and his tuck-pointer.  Once they gathered their gear, they proceeded to the block walls that were on either side of the driveway.

 

             The shadows had begun their encroachment on the warm dirt road. The men turned west and agreed that there would be a very nice sunset on this warm May night.  The sun would be down within forty minutes and they needed to take pictures.  Antonio put the camera close to his face and shut his right eye.  He was bent over at the hip, focusing on the grout joints of the block wall.  He was getting a close up picture when Martin began to tap him on the right shoulder.

 

            “Tony!  Tony, look!” Martin whispered.

 

            “I know, I know.  That well over there by the tree is cool.  I am going to take pictures of that next,”  Antonio said.

 

            “No.  Look!”  Martin said fervently.

 

             Antonio stood, turned to face the same direction as Martin and saw four coyotes on a nearby hill.  Three of the coyotes were very young.  Antonio snapped off half a dozen pictures of the coyotes.

 

             “I think that was the coolest thing I’ve ever seen.  I’m glad we have pictures to show people otherwise nobody would believe us,” Martin said.

 

 Antonio laughed. “I think the sun and the coyotes live together.  It seemed like the both went home right over that hill.” 

 

            “I think you owe me a hundred dollars.”  Martin said.

 

            “I think it’s time to go home.”  Antonio responded.

 

           The men returned the next day around 6 P.M. and spent nearly two hours watching for the wild animals on the hill again.  They didn’t bother to photograph the masonry at the old ranch.  They returned the following Saturday but still the coyotes stayed away.  They did not go back to the old ranch again because they had nothing left to do. 

 

            As they drove away for the last time, Martin said, “Think we’ll ever see a pack like that again?”

 

            Antonio shrugged and remained silent. 

 

                       END

Zachary P. Edwards is in the navy currently serving aboard the USS Lake Champlain. This is his first published work.
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